|Reviews for Time Vulture|
| Michal Claire chapter 1 . 4/20
I’m probably just tired. But the ending feels a bit flat. Nothing emphasized?
It’s probably supposed to feel flat because several things are there to think about.
(I’m guessing the shadow might be the time vulture. And that this is a story the mc was telling a friend of. So I think maybe that could be something?
| Morrowseer chapter 1 . 4/20
| The Puddlejumper chapter 1 . 4/20
Love all your stories! This one is one of my favorites so far.