Reviews for The Wind in Thy Hurricane
MoonlitAconites chapter 1 . 5/9
This is an interesting story you have going. It reminds of the Greek myths centering around Circe, but with an interesting plot twist and less sorcery. From what your synopsis alludes to, much still awaits for these characters, and, frankly, I'm intrigued to see what happens from here. That being said, the plot has potential as a good story and I commend you on the lovely world and character establishment thus far. The one point of criticism I would like to offer, however, focuses on the stiff dialogue. Some points could be reworded to sound more like an interaction between family and certain statements lack sincere emotion. Otherwise, I look forward to where you take this story and will read any installments you decide to upload.