Reviews for Scunner's Last Run
Mislav chapter 1 . 5/25
Pretty interesting and disturbing story. It really reads like one of Lovecraft's works of "weird fiction". You did a pretty good job of developing the protagonist and building up the tension, in less than a thousand words. The part about the brothel was a nice touch. The ending was especially gruesome, and unexpected. It makes me wonder how the whole thing even started, how was the first elf created. The final scene was particularly intense. I didn't expect Scunner to make it out of there alive. I wonder how he felt about his involvement in the whole thing, and what happened afterward. Keep up the great work. I had fun reading this.
D. W. Tyn chapter 1 . 5/10
Wow. I know that you don't care too much for elves, but JEEZ! A disturbing original concept, nonetheless.