|Reviews for Club for the Extraordinary|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/17
I understand that juggling all those characters is difficult, but it seems you've (maybe) missed some important expository bits. Like, if Damien knew he could teleport and turn invisible, AND knew about some superhero club, how the heck would he be so stupid to not connect it to the mysterious letter? Or any of the others, that KNEW about their powers?
And if the kids knew about their powers, why weren't they mentioned before they were asked to show them? Why wasn't the story behind them finding their powers explained? And why are they so eager to hop on board with becoming superheroes? And how are superheroes viewed in their society? Are they common, or rare? The kids didn't seem surprised to hear about them.