Reviews for life and death
Sir Scott chapter 3 . 7/13
I like how this poem follows. Good job.
~Sir Scott
Sir Scott chapter 2 . 6/13
Pretty sad story. It's a shame that Luke could not save him. But, some people are hard to save. They have reached the end of their ropes so to speak.
~Sir Scott
joeypotter85 chapter 1 . 6/13
It is a bit unclear what you were trying to convey here, is this a poem about loss? Hard tell if you're writing from the perspective of someone about to take their life, someone whom already did or merely a loved one passed reflecting back. Regardless, keep writing you will improve by the day, I promise
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 5/20
Very intense reading really. I enjoy poems, but are harder to write reviews for.
~Sir Scott