|Reviews for The Dark Veil: Allegro|
| The Feline Overlord chapter 1 . 5/29
Finally finished with this, and man, it was a wild ride! Great job Gold! There was a good balance of action and exposition, and I love that even the minor characters have a lot of depth to them.
The only feedback I have is a couple small things—the pacing of the action scenes feels a bit off sometimes, and there are some inconsistencies in switching between present/past tense.
Overall a great first chapter though! I'm also happy to see that my "Radio McTowerFace" made its way in!