Reviews for Fun In The Sun
knockmeoffmyfeet chapter 1 . 6/29
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AvegaLil chapter 1 . 4/9/2021
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RainbowPearls chapter 37 . 11/9/2020
I'm blushing beet! I definitely definitely loved their first kiss. They poured their love out in it for whole even if they were hormone driven or sensation- driven. It wasn't for Bob anymore. It was just for both of them. The scene was very profound, intricate and you lucidly and beautifully and very precisely wrote their feelings during their kiss.
That last scream of them getting a room was a thunderstorm! XD
Loved it! Update soon
:)
RainbowPearls chapter 36 . 11/9/2020
Oh woah woah woah! This was amusement level two! Look at their daring attitudes, especially Sal! How openly she told Nick that she didn't had sex since quite time and her appetite is in dilemma! Lmao! XD
And to add, alright, what Nick reacted was not very shocking, he's the guy after all and Sal stimulated him! But I was hyped and hyper amused when he offered her to sleep with him? O.o
XD
God, Sal was like beet red by that offer. The shower offer was hilarious, I'm sure rather than bathing, they would have commented on each other's physiques! XD
Sal looks pretty in that outfit, really. Everything apart, I'm already imagining them making out frenzily and passionately, be it before confession or after confession! XD
With the amount of soaring sexual tension between them, readers legit deserve some M rated stuff between them in future! (pardon xD)
Knowing you writing style, if you write it, it will be BOOOMMM! XD
RainbowPearls chapter 35 . 11/7/2020
Oh my God! How badly I was blushing like a ripe red tomato while reading it! That towel scene at the dressing table was a biggest teaser to the readers! Seriously before their hormones ru out of place and go ravage,they need to sort the sexual tension between them *wipes away the sweat on my forehead*.
They basically looked like a couple with Sal warmed up in towel and seated on makeup table and doing makeup. Nick hawking at her figure had me stark gawking at the screen! XD
Btw that adopted joke was hilarious! You know, even we siblings tease our youngest brother the same, that he's adopted and not real and don't belong to our family and he's from orphanage even though that's not true! XD I was laughing out loud when Nick teased him like that! XD also the counter guy assuming them to be a couple was hilarious!
This night seems to be one wonderful beautiful night and they have lot to look ahead.
Nice chapter, looking ahead for more.
Sam chapter 32 . 11/2/2020
Chapter 34:
Okay dear author, please quell the tension and patience of your readers and let Sal confess her feelings for Nick. I'm super bated and curious now. I could totally kind of feel Sal's emotions on the end. The final position was very intimate and arousing, and Sal couldn't hold back. After all, a guy is the hunter and women remains hunted. The physical attraction what Nick is thinking off was displayed well on the first night itself when they were drunk and high. But Nick getting off her when he tilted her head and was getting embarrased was kind of him. The merman and Aqua women banter was very very humorous and I laughed reading that, but that just ended up in creating an inevitable sexual tension between them. They definitely need to go to hotel and find themselves *coughs* a separate room for each! XD
Loved this chapter a lot, Bev
Update soon. :)
Sam chapter 32 . 11/2/2020
Chapter 33:
This was a serene chapter! I might just want to loe down in balcony on evening and get the feels of they enjoyed even if that's not possible. I love your imagination, Bev. It's too optimistic and beautiful and sees life from a big positive side and appeases ones heart. Ahmn, coming back to the chapter, the mayonnaise part cracked me up. But oh Nick you were wrong. SAl is not a clumsy person, she's very organized and I was super amused seeing her bribg the entire kitchen in her bag. God that was so organized thing she'd done for her. As far as that comment of chained to the sink is concerned, xD, I could only think of one thing, "Chained to Nick's heart!" XD
Okay I kinda got reminded of song, Chained to the rhythm, that was the thing on my mind there. Actually, I kinda agree a lot a lot with Sal's thoughts on marriage. She's right, dude! *whistles!* and Nick! He's si naughty! First those comments in sandwiches and then bondage! This will be a romantic bondahe called as Marriage, Nichlolas xD.
I feel bad for Sal. Her mom is seriously bossy. Glad that Sal moved in here. Her tale of shifting was a little sad. But honestly her dad is more miserable in hands of his wife, lol. But Sal is such a sweet personality, very opposite to her mom. And finally, the sunset wrapped up so beautifully, and there are no words of the beautiful feels I got there. Absolutely loved the ceiling part in the end. That just made me smile :)

~Sam, aka Rainbowpearls.
RainbowPearls chapter 32 . 10/28/2020
The mighty ice cream fight! I loved the ice cream fight, obviously it was so fun to read,especially the spankinh part got me laughing to no ends! But the flavors were divine, yum! And yes, Sal is very honest and easy going and that's one unique and wonderful thing about her. Plus she makes friends very easily, like Izzy. So definitely Nick is right about her and that's nothing wrong when he mentally began to compare Jen with her. Jen is different and he felt the difference, just so.
Fay might be beautiful but in Nick's eyes, Sal is divine angel beauty and that cinversation went a little serious, and Sal was sort of uncomfortable there! They got a nice audience after ice cream fight though, plus that waiter! That was hilarious!
Aha, Nick and Sal do resemble naughty rambunctious school children sometimes! XD
RainbowPearls chapter 31 . 10/27/2020
."Who knew a bike could have so many innuendos," she said to herself.~ Seriously this cracked me up great time! That bikes are always so sexy to see and I absolutely remember how happy, wild and excited I was to ride on a new bike that my youngest uncle had bough back in 2018, and we went on a long drive on some highway for some treat! SAL not being accustomed to sit on the back of bikes was very amusing and advantageous to Nick as well, of how she was clinging in to him for protection and dear life. That was so sweet! And her outfit was even hot! Plus their own imaginations were superb! XD Anddd I really loved the drive, the highway, the air, the speed, everything going off blur was just fantastic!
Loved this chapter! Let's see what happens next.
RainbowPearls chapter 30 . 10/23/2020
Awww, the last part was so sweet when he kissed her and said that she's precious for him too! Matala seems fun and there seems to be a big adventure, a palace and an axe awaiting for them! And I'm sure they'll have a nice jounery clinging close to each other on the bike. Lol, That was funny when she said she was good at maths anyways and was the star kid just because if the teacher's look? Anyway I agree, I was not a fan of history too except in grade 10th that is, ;P
Now the history teacher was indeed sounded like an old geezer! XD lol.
Nick has some real adventure to offer them and thos really looks good ahead!
Looking forward to more, dude! Update soon!
RainbowPearls chapter 29 . 10/22/2020
Woah woah, Sal need to calm down and take a break. XD that super long sentences and so many adjectives in there starting from amazingest was so was Nick's reaction and constant clueless shrugging at Ruth. Well the universe exploding at the intake of coke just got me laughing but thank god, Sal didn't manage to explode. Seriously, Sal seems frisky, high,vibrant and in full blow to give Nick another doe of her wonderful presence. And how sweet it was when she just hugged him! :'D
Well,I'm totally intrigued for Nick's 10 on 10 plan now!
RainbowPearls chapter 28 . 10/22/2020
Haha Haha! Absolutely humorous this was. Especially Nick's reaction of being so thrilled and Ruth getting horrorer after she mentioned that Al busters kind of around him. I'm glad that Nick opened up in front of Ruth and spoke about Jen and Sal especially admitting that might bait would have been different if he met Sal first instead. He clearly has a dysfunctional relationship with Jen. He should really take some step and he should ask Sal out. Knowing that Jen is stubborn and she kept on coming back to him and nagged him for moving on,I'm bated to see what Nick does. Its time he rips off the plaster for once and all. Nice chapter. Onto the next
RainbowPearls chapter 27 . 10/20/2020
The sunburn! I almost thought that Izzy collapsed! But anyway nice together and fun the girls had. I laughed when Sal lied about Izzy how they were kindergarten friends. XD The shin thing was funny!I like how Sal genuinely mentions Fay is her best friend. Ann is very daring. I must say. And plus Sal blushing up like that at their imaginations of picturing the guy that way really was so amusing to read. I was like Sal and blushing? But aww, how nicely they consoled her once more. Also I admire Sal's character in the way she tries to hide her feelings for Nick, saying that he should find someone better.

You know," Pat began, sweeping Sal's hair back from her face with one hand and kissing her on the top of her head, "since we know that Jen has hidden feelings for another guy, maybe Nick also has hidden feelings for someone else," she hinted.- This was definitely deep line.

I'm all intrigued for NickSal returning back! And oh ho, the surprise by Nick will be disastrous, I'm sure :D
RainbowPearls chapter 26 . 10/20/2020
Such a fun filled sweet chapter! Seriously Sal takes no time to brighten the environment and ambiance around her with her cheery persona and friendly nature. I like Izzy too and her shock over boyiece, mind shattering theory was hilarious! The women did have fun I must say. And now, Izzy will probably be working at airport together with them! Just great.
Now Izy got a goodd company and a bunch of warm friends too, that's sweet! :)
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