Reviews for Starting Position
Nov1Z chapter 26 . 7/1
Omg... This book should be published...
InkDreams chapter 25 . 6/23
I finally got through to the end of this story and I'm so glad I did! I loved Elliot and Ben as individuals and as a couple. I think they both had really great growth throughout the story and you kept me rooting for them to be endgame the entire time. I'm so glad to have read this
Guest chapter 24 . 6/14
The story is very well paced,truly keep will take away some abstract ness and pleasantness if we were to
Take a look into ben’s view on the events but it will be interesting
Guest chapter 23 . 6/13
I love Ben's sweet family. Glad he's going to be okay. He sure is thoughtful to give Tyson the benefit of the doubt.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9
This is interesting so far. The characters are unique and I am interested to see where the story goes.
laroeroe chapter 19 . 6/8
This is such a lovely story! I love the characters and am rooting for them. The wait is killing me though! I want Elliot and Ben to get together so bad!
Guest chapter 19 . 6/8
The story has engaging characters and it feels like a wait to have them speak,truly keep going
NikNak13 chapter 13 . 6/4
This story is beautiful in so many ways! I especially loved the closing scene, where you can imagine the phoenix in Elliot almost erupting through her skin; she just needs a little more stoking to fully emerge. But what's going on with her and Morgan?! I'm definitely on the side of Team Ben! He's such a gentleman, so sweet and patient.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/3
The story is different and the characters have shades rather than a concrete personality .their vivid emotions are contrast with their fleeting personality,just like in actual life
laroeroe chapter 11 . 6/2
This is getting so good! I can't wait to for the next chapter!
laroeroe chapter 9 . 6/1
I loved this chapter! So adorable. Rocket is the cutest! And it was so fun to meet Ben's sister Erin
laroeroe chapter 8 . 5/31
I loved this chapter! The adoption shop was so cute! And I'm really liking the developing relationship between Elliot and Ben.
laroeroe chapter 4 . 5/31
Ooooooh I love the moments between Elliot and Ben! Can't wait to see what happens next
laroeroe chapter 1 . 5/31
Good start! I am enjoying this so far and can't wait to see where it goes.
InkDreams chapter 1 . 5/26
I'm very excited to see where this goes! The story flowed smoothly and I think the characters are very interesting.