|Reviews for In Pursuit Of|
| JDFly chapter 6 . 7/1
Cliff hanger: Great, and chapter 7 is already posted so I can read it tomorrow.
| Maia the Writer chapter 8 . 6/29
I read the first chapter and I had to read the next seven! You write really well and I like how you make Henley realistic in how she's struggling and so scared. Nick's an interesting character as he's withdrawn, but for a very good reason. I like the friendship that Henley and Nick have and the premise of the story makes the moments they have together more interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| JDFly chapter 1 . 6/24
OK, an action packed chapter one, but that isn't what caught my attention. I have a niece named Henley. What a lousy name to hang on a little girl. When she gets to high school, will the kids call her Hen? Her relatives, except me, call her Peanut. That's worse than Hen. I only see her a few times a year. We live in different states. I wonder if her name and nickname could have an adverse effect on her personality. Maybe she'll go with it as your character in this story has.
| WindSongEnchantment chapter 4 . 6/15
I'm loving this! Very human and I can't get over your characters! More please!