Reviews for Mr Clown wants to play with you
Sonata chapter 5 . 7/18
Not bad~ Write more stories little girl!
Sonata chapter 2 . 7/18
Hey, I do give you gifts!
Goblin Slayer chapter 1 . 6/2
This was good. A little more descriptive of both scenarios and characters will help. And try to deepen the meaning of your words. Like having an impact.!
But overall nice one!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29
this was beautiful, please continue
Fahad chapter 1 . 5/29
As a writer, I must say the story holds both inspiration and ingenuity. The process of writing a story is tough so always keep in mine to revise your writing.

For someone who wrote it for the first time, this is spectacular! To help you more, you could use a website/software called "grammarly".

Keep reading and keep writing.
Writing is more of a practice than a talent so the more you put your efforts in it, the more it will have better results. And don't be afraid to make mistakes. I have written for more than a decade and I still make mistakes of sorts.

I am hoping to read more from you, September 11.
Cheers!