|Reviews for I'm Over Him|
| Anihyr Moonstar chapter 1 . 6/29
[So why can't I shake off this residue of jealousy that coats my mind...] I really enjoy the word choice here, specifically "residue" and "coats" really paints a visceral image. Like you can *feel* the jealousy as a physical sensation griming up her thoughts.
I also enjoy the "waiting for his smiles like a pilgrim" - it just seems clever and unique. And also comes with a sort of archaic element, like you know feeling this way is outdated and you should be able to move on, but still it lingers.
Good work, and welcome to the review game. :]