Reviews for Beautiful Scraps
atalantea chapter 1 . 6/8
I like the theme/motif you used in this piece, about empty, abandoned spaces and unused items. I liked the picture and the imagery you painted. I especially like your ending. The Illegitimate grief line makes me wonder why. Why did this persona feel like he/she does not have a right to their pain? Very thought provoking and cool! Keep writing!