|Reviews for Pandora's Retribution|
| Woedin chapter 1 . 7/2
~An offering that's both
succinct and cogent, and
I enjoy reading your works~
Truly, right under our feet,
a dormant evil does sleep,
it's as hungry as a famished young lion.
Tread lightly I say,
and let it sleep life away,
for when aroused we gazelles begin diein'.
| Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 7/1
Quite appropriate for current times. Last line explodes (as if from a box) and makes this myth real. Lot to unpack here I think.
| MirrorOnes chapter 1 . 6/11
Love this haiku! It's really simple but elegantly paints the story of Pandora's box and it's illusion to modern times (especially now).