Reviews for Moments in Verse
Rurrlock-God of Power chapter 1 . 6/13
I'm always happy to see new writing from you, whether it's fictional stories or poetry reflecting real life, you do a wonderful job of conveying emotion and feeling. It is difficult to express how we feel a lot of the time, especially when dealing with overwhelming emotions like depression or anxiety, but you did a fantastic job of writing it in this poem. It's heartbreaking to read, but it can also help others who deal with the same kind of struggle and it does well to show people that they are not alone. I would love to see more collection poems from you. There's a wide array of different subject matters you can write about, and I'll be here to show my support and read them. Best of luck to you with the other poems you have in mind. Take care and love you lots. xxx
InkWorthy chapter 1 . 6/12
Good on you for taking on your feelings and putting them out there. It can be extremely difficult, but you handle the subject artfully and with honesty. I enjoyed the flow and repetition of the "I cannot - I cannot - I cannot" in particular. Hope you feel better soon. - Inky