Reviews for Mental Alcatraz
BentleyBro chapter 1 . 7/1/2020
It looks like you copied from something other than Google Docs and then pasted it here. Because of that, there are random things I doubt you typed up in this story appearing at the beginning and end of each paragraph. I'd suggest backspacing those things out of the document and choosing replace chapter to fix this so that it's easier for people to read. This story's not bad though