|Reviews for Failure With Honor|
| BradytheJust chapter 2 . 10/22/2020
"The Charm of the Colored Dust faded away just as the powder did." That's a great line my friend, and I really enjoyed this second chapter. It's been quite a while since I've been on Fictionpress and this story just got me right in the mood to keep reading!
I also loved how you described the town, even if it had some manure problems. The way you described the Lord's tower was very nice too, allowing me to see that it was a 'palace' But it was also one that was made of wood and stone and not super impressive unless it was compared to the town itself.
Great job and I can't wait to keep reading! :)
| BradytheJust chapter 1 . 7/6/2020
Ah, this story brings me back to adventuring in Skyrim and going back into mines and finding a whole lot more than bandits! I also really enjoyed the gnome battalion, and it was a very unique use of magical illusion.
Additionally, I enjoyed the setting, especially the description of the mine. And now, I'm really excited to see where this story goes!
Keep on writing and I will keep writing!