Reviews for Windfall
BradytheJust chapter 1 . 7/6/2020
My friend, this is a really great story! :) For one thing, I really enjoyed the worldbuilding and the different lands each character hailed from, as well as the little quirks that made each land interesting. I can't believe all the Apati soldiers are immigrant children! Too young to fight indeed, and I'm worried for when the war comes along...

Additionally, I really enjoyed how you described the fight scenes. Not too many people can write a good fistfight scene and make it interesting, but I could see it all in my head.

Great story, and I also liked the touch with the rosewater, that last part made me cry! I'll be following this story with great interest, and can't wait to read more!