|Reviews for Escape the Ordinary|
| Kit Rogers chapter 1 . 7/6
This is a good start! I think you did the journal format well; it totally sounds like the way someone would write in a personal journal. I like how casually the character dropped Devin and Ronn’s names — it’s clear to the reader that something strange is going on, but it doesn’t break the flow of the story at all. Great work, keep it up!