|Reviews for The Alabaster chronicles|
| DalkonCledwin chapter 1 . 7/8
Wow, nice Cliff-hangar at the end.
So, short analysis. The prologue chapter is quite good, but it will definitely need to be beta'd / edited before it can actually be used in a published Light Novel. The second thing I noticed, is that you published each chapter as an individual story, when they should really have all been a single story, which I will explain to you how to do when we next chat in Discord (this is DCixen by the way). And lastly, the start of it felt a little abrupt... then again that could just be my general dislike of reading scripts as stories.