Reviews for Kit
MV Kramer chapter 1 . 7/17
It's pretty obvious that this was originally a Harry Potter fic, and you're just changing the names. I don't know if you have this as a Harry Potter fic anywhere, but if not, I suggest you go to and write it as a Harry Potter fic. I myself am not fond of Lord Potter fics, but I know plenty of people love them, so you might get more comments.