|Reviews for The Stoner|
| Thomina chapter 1 . 7/8
OMG I reeeaaally loved this XDD. It was so much fun to read! You write well, and managed to keep your story interesting from start to end 8D
If you don't mind, I've got a suggestion: about that very big paragraph at the start of the story, try chopping it off to more paragraphs. I mean, don't erase anything! Just use the three lines rule: after every three or four lines, put some space between them and take the next sentence to the next paragraph. Makes it easier to read.
Aside from that, your story was very enjoyable. Thank you :))