Reviews for The Other Place
Bluegoldstone chapter 1 . 7/12
I love this, it's so exciting and easy to imagine. The only thing I will say is that you repeat the phrase "not tearing my eyes from the screen", perhaps you could change one of them to something like: still keeping my eyes glues to the screen, or something like that. Apart from that I think it is amazing, the world and the characters feel so real. Please write more of this story.