|Reviews for 006: Bastille|
| resting-in-daisies chapter 1 . 9/6
This story is intriguing! I love the French Revolution era and anything having to do with fantasy or supernatural involved makes it more interesting. Definitely following! :)
| Aouregan chapter 1 . 7/31
I apologize for sending an anonymous review. However, I got locked out because password is an issue. Now, to the review.
I really liked this story. I think you have a lot of talent writing. Clearly, you like history and I really do like the fantasy element added here. I like how you have Cerise as a sort of sympathetic character towards Louis XVI and his family- at least that is what I make of her statements.
Just a correction. Since Juste is speaking to a woman, the 'cher ami' would actually be 'chère amie'. It's a minor mistake, but noticeable when written.
I do see this as a longer story, but I do like where you ended it. It is a bit rushed in some parts, but overall, I really do like this story. :)