|Reviews for Gameplay VS Story|
| NinjaEeveeKitty chapter 1 . 7/15
This is a very interesting look into the gaming industry! As someone who wants to be a writer, sometimes I forget that the game mechanics are just as important. This was so cool to read.
I didn't see any errors in this in terms of spelling or grammar for the most part. Some portions feel like there are too many commas, but I too am a comma-lover, so the same criticism can be leveled against me.
I enjoyed reading this! I look forward to browsing through your other works.