|Reviews for Heartbeat|
| TalesOfTreesAndStars chapter 1 . 8/19
Well now I’m sad.
Not really sure how you review this kinda stuff. You captured the plight of the poor little guy really well. I liked how you brought back the not knowing breathing/ not knowing running thing at the end from having been mentioned earlier. It helped tie the whole thing together nicely.
The way he sweetly and innocently views his mother is really heartbreaking considering what she does to him.