I love this piece. The analogies toward the end are both absolutely genius and fitting.

I often struggle with this kind of powerful subtlety; the tendency to succumb to the overwrought tempts me. Heck, it just did with that alliteration... There I go again!

You have exemplified exactly what I need to improve upon. Thanks!

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