Reviews for Oddly Saintly
David Gardner chapter 1 . 7/30
Let me just state that I like it, because I have a few comments that I hope are not to rough. The story seems to start at chapter 2 or 3, which is disorienting as a reader. I don't know who she is, I don't know where she is, or how she got there. It makes it easier for the reader to disengage from the story, which is a shame as it makes for a good later chapter. I will however continue to follow the story so you can make me eat my words, or at least amend this review.
Good work and good luck.