|Reviews for Vokashe: The Sword Moves Once|
| StarlitDuck chapter 1 . 8/13
Oh wow, this is awesome! It is very medieval and atmospheric. I want to get to know more about Veram and his past, as the world he lives in seems like it could be interesting. I hope to see a well rounded character and an interesting world.
The dialogue is good, the action is good. The only thing I would suggest is that you could dive a little deeper into the POV character's head, give us more insight into what he is thinking. Other than that, I would say this is a very good start. Keep it up :)