Reviews for The Dream Killer
Ferasder chapter 1 . 9/9/2020
This was amazing!
I liked the description you've given... I am in taken in the scenery, both physical and metaphorical. The three narrators in different arena's of the society whose arc's later converge is quite engrossing.
It was a great pilot.
I would advise to try using bold or italics for the headings to make the story look a bit more colourful and distinct. And maybe keep a centre-placed title at the beginning. Of course this isn't that important, but maybe it may work better.
Well done again!
I'd like to stay in touch, since you've also asked for a review. Please revert back to me on PM.
teamleothebest chapter 1 . 9/8/2020
This is incredible! I love your ability to put thoughts into words that doesn't end up looking like 'Bug sat on rug. '
I've always wanted to write my own tory like this, I just cant come up with any good plots.
Keep it up :)