Reviews for Make It Twenty Three
J.Kuzzey chapter 3 . 9/13
Fantastic job so far. Excellently written. The descriptions are perfect, the dialogue is fun and witty. From a technical standpoint it looks flawless. I haven't seen this idea before, and you do a good job in chapter 2 setting up the universe and how things work. Your introduction of our two main characters is good. I'm curious to see where you take this. It has so much potential. Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/11
I’m following this story as soon as I remember my password, this story is cool