|Reviews for Vampire Detective|
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 10/10/2020
I definitely like version #1 the best. Honestly I don't see much point in version #2, as it's just a few sentences.
Although I am intrigued with the story, I had a hard time understanding what was going on. I can see that its inspired by DC Comics, but as a person who knows very little about them, I was confused. I feel like i was just dropped into the middle of the story without a lot of context, and it's easy to get lost that way.
On the plus side I love a good vampire tale! In particular I loved how you used dialogue to build an atmosphere for the story. It was clear to me that this was taking on a noir vibe, very classic black and white detective feel, which I really enjoyed.