Reviews for Flashing Lights
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 10/10
Lots of interesting imagery here.

First off I was struck with your opening line "like flashing lights on a strip." For some reason the flashing light imagery makes m.j e think of anxiety or chaotic energy. Times right now are very manic for a lot of people and I thought that this was particularly pathway to start the poem.

Even though you set up a modern-esque story at the beginning you allude to money and gold which made me think of a more timeless and classic expression. Like I said lots of intriguing imagery here. Keep up the good work.

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