Reviews for Return to Nature
Auraptor chapter 1 . 10/18
A neat short story. It isn't easy to give these types of stories a poignant ending, but I think the author managed.
The story is, for the most part, grammatically correct and readable.
My only suggestion for the author would be to include more description of the surroundings as well as what the characters look like. That, and maybe to work on those big paragraphs. Most of them feel a bit rambling and could use more varied sentence length.
That's just me though. I think it was nice work overall.