|Reviews for Child Heart|
| BradytheJust chapter 1 . 10/22/2020
In less than 1,300 words my friend, you managed to get me hooked into the story and into the fate of these three characters! Four if we count the strange winged Wander in the sky. I'm not sure where these characters are or what they are doing, but you've done a fine job giving them personalities and banter with one another, which I always like to see when I read,
I also loved this lines "Noticing the embers fly into the air... she wondered what it was like to be one. To ignite into life then shrivel up and turn to ash."
Great job and I can't wait to keep reading more!