Reviews for A Forbidden Romance
redopium chapter 1 . 11/19
Love the descriptive language used, it's really easy to visualize what's going on. There's a good ratio of dialogue and narration! I suggest adding more paragraph breaks so there aren't many blocks of text that look intimidating to read. Also, whenever a paragraph has dialogue, it should be the dialogue of only one person. You should start a new paragraph when a new person speaks! I think this is a lovely story and I'm looking forward to more :)
Person123 chapter 1 . 11/18
we stan it
good grammer
very descriptive
make another one