|Reviews for Trees (by xx FantasyCreature xx)|
| scobberlotcher17 chapter 1 . 11/18
I think it was well written. I liked the "Trees are so selfless, But they are very helpless" put in the end. It gives a nice full circle ya know? Maybe add a metaphor or two? I personally would have taken out the the because in the "because they have neither feet nor hooves". Good job for a first poem. Keep it up! I look forward to reading anymore you publish.
Have a good day/night. Stay Safe, Stay Happy.