Reviews for Against the Current
Onkwehonwe Kashatstenhshera chapter 1 . 4/13/2022
Well you rebooted it but i will reread it i thought about dong the same thing to the alchemist labrynth but i should have just not deleted it. Anyway nce again i love that you depict eras seldom talked about in our history.

The snake biting the dog and killing it reminds me of when Rufus got bitten.

I'm trying to also piucture what any forrests in Oklahoma look like because you know we all got a different impression.
FlorieRy chapter 6 . 7/26/2021
Nice! Really good writing skills and original plot. I’m enjoying it so far.
The only thing I found a little difficult to read was the switch between the girls point of view, which was in first person, and the guy’s point of view which was told in third person. I think sticking to either one or the other would make the story flow more. I do like to know the story from both their sides, though.
Keep it going :)
RemiDaria001 chapter 1 . 7/12/2021
Nice start. It's an enjoyable read. Not bad. If you wanted to, instead of Charlieeeee, I would do, "Charlie!" He called, or something along those lines, but really that's more a preference than a suggestion. Keep writing. :)