Reviews for The House Painter
Mislav chapter 1 . 8/26
Pretty fun and interesting story. It pulled me right in, and kept me guessing until the end. The ending really took me off guard. I liked how you resolved it all in the last two paragraphs. I especially liked how you described the bar, and Gage's state of mind, it was really descriptive and investing. Great job with explaining the motive in one (and last) line: "When his body hit the floor, the hitwoman was already gone- gun holstered and a wine glass in her hand." I assume that the hitwoman was hired by Gage's wife. Keep up the great work. I always like reading your stories.
Joeson chapter 1 . 4/19
Author’s way of storytelling is so good, I suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition, you might be their next big star.
CitrusChickadee chapter 1 . 3/10
Ah, I assume she was hired by his wife, then? The foreshadowing was subtle but clever here; very nice.