|Reviews for phases of flight|
| The Silent Spider chapter 28 . 10/28/2021
This is one of the best stories I have ever read.
| Folding Turtles chapter 28 . 8/5/2021
This story and your writing are absolutely beautiful. The bittersweet narrative reminds me of the middle section of Tess of d'Urbervilles and La La Land. You might want to stop the "eleven" chapter at the rose shredding and Luke's internal monologue to preserve the high-flying literary texture of the work. I thoroughly enjoyed the literary elements in this piece. You have a great touch for heartwarming prose.