Reviews for Electus Defaeco 1: The Legend Unfolds
Splloodfina chapter 5 . 8/30/2004
yay! great story. i sort'ove read them out of order but they are good just the same!
p2 chapter 5 . 7/11/2001
Oh, I love it! What an ending. I wasn't expecting THAT! *grins* Great story, congratulations. I'm off to read the sequel. *wanders away*
Sad Little Creature chapter 5 . 7/4/2001
Hey interesting story. Only thing is after I read it I had a nightmare demons came after me by possesing inanimate household objects... I hold you responsible for that dream I hope you know... ;p
Strages Aduro chapter 5 . 7/1/2001
I can think of one word to describe this...Bravo!

Very compelling, the story line kept drawing me in tighter and truly made me worry about the characters involved...The characters were well developed into the story, but it would have been nicer for their appearence to have been better described (hair, clothing, etc)! I couldn't quite grasp the image of the Demon Shiyu, there were a few that were partially described physically, but the leader of the demons should have had the most described appearence of all, and instead had none! I did enjoy the description of her powers coming to light, however, that was quite interesting!

All in all, it was a fantastic story with some rough edges...I can't wait to read Part 2...it was very intriguing!

From 1-10, I give this a 7, points deducted for lack of character description.
Jenny chapter 5 . 7/1/2001
That was good! Yay!