Reviews for Pressure
crazy dog events chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
i like this, but i think htere are far too many commas. but i understand you did it for the rhythm... such is life...

other than the commas i like it very much.
Paul Pagano chapter 1 . 3/13/2002
That poem is fantabulous. I love the way you use puctuation to slow the reader down to encourage thought
HopelesslyRomantic chapter 1 . 7/3/2001
that was great!... wow, you are definately a natural at this...