Hey, nice,...umm well, creepy poem! It gave me shivers. well done and has good imagery! keep on trucking!

This somehow reminds me of Lucy Westenra, from Bram Stoker's original Dracula novel - and yes, that's meant as praise. Hauntingly portrayed, sad feelings dominate the field here. I suppose you did know that the official title of Vlad Tepes, who lent his name to the blood-sucking Count we all know and abhor/admire, was actually translatable as 'prince'? A fine piece of poetry, in any case. I liked reading it.

Very cool and original.

hehehe. i love it. very well written- the staza standing out in my mind "he has no reflection/i have no form of protection." i like this a lot. vampires are great subjects.

This poem was so awsome. I now know why Sarah loves you so much. Keep up the good work.

Suni Ashton

I like. But i dont like u.

very interesting, a good story too.

Freaky concept and wonderful imagery. You should spell-check though.

I really enjoyed this poem!

Thank you for reviewing my poem. I appreciate it so much.

that was kool! are you into vampires? i love them! i wonder what inspried you to write this pome?

ANGEL NAZI _~*

good poem. i like it _

i love ur writting, so good, this one was very well done also

not bad, decent actually. keep up the good work salior. aye, aye, cap'n! land ho! raise the sails, ye scallywags, or i'll make yer walk da plank! ARG! Sandra is me treasure, and no one else can 'ave her, arg! well gotta go. byez.