Nice poem. And a good display of faith. Keep up the good work.

hey really great song, i just started writing songs and trying to start a christian band but really great song really great

This song is filled with truth. God does indeed cry over things that we do. I like how you placed his tears in with rain (a very cliche thing I guess) but you alomst made it original, as if you were the creator of such a saying. Are you a christian? I don't think that these words are those written by one who doesn't have any christian, or religious, background. Keep writting. Maybe review some of mine?

hmm...it is a good idea...a really good idea actually..I personaly belive that there are a lot of lines you could do with out..they just seem to make this really wordy(and at times forced)..