Reviews for Summer Heat
DaughterOfTheDawn chapter 1 . 1/25/2003
i liked it, but the beginning didn't make that much sense, at least to me, but it makes a lil more sense when you read the rest. so great job and keep up the good work
The Excessively Loud Waterfowl chapter 1 . 5/27/2002
Very interesting poem. I like the continuing idea and the in betweens (verses so to speak). Anyway, I like this poem and I think that you should write more of it. _

;:Magnificant White Flying Swan:;

P.S. Thank's for reading and reviewing SD and I's novel "An Egyptian Tale". _~
Blue Turtle chapter 1 . 1/12/2002
Jhondie. That was interesting. I kind of understood it, but I liked the repetition of "The Summer Heat gets the best of us"; but to be honest, had no idea how that fit into everything else in the poem. But it was a D.W.B.B.B.I.W.G.B. poem (Days Will Be Bad But It Will Get Better), and I like those type of poems. Keep up the writing! :)
The Sadist chapter 1 . 7/8/2001
Hey, this is good! I had a bit of trouble with the rhythm but who cares, it's not a song neway... "The summer heat gets the best of us"...that just sounds really honest & poetic! Keep writing!
Fantasy Kitty chapter 1 . 7/7/2001
Intresting, i skimmed it a bit, but i can tell you had alot of thoughts put into this poem! its nice!