Reviews for Dawn Never Came
Sylvia Sylverton chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
that is so melancholy :( and beautiful.
Elsinore chapter 1 . 4/10/2002
That was good! (It was a but sing-songy in parts, but for the most part, extraordinary!)

Was this, perchance, inspired by "The Highwayman"? Some of the phrasing was similar, and it had the same rhythmic pattern.

I really enjoyed this poem... especially the description.

2 am IS the best time to write, isn't it? Lol!
Werecat99 chapter 1 . 3/1/2002
Very sad, but captivating.
Selena Benilo chapter 1 . 9/29/2001
It is I, the from hell. Heehee. Well, this was good, and any flames can eat and die! There, I can't stand ignorant mother ers. So there. A very beautiful peace of literature, Aki! Can't wait till you call me, alright?
Darkdream1 chapter 1 . 7/7/2001
Oh boy, a few things don't rhyme quite well, but it is told amazingly well, him being her twin bro was overly corny, but it gets 4 outta 5 stars from me. And now taht I read it it did touch my emotions, with slight depression, obviously that means it is well done~