|Reviews for A lifetime together|
| emptyword chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
Absolutely -gorgeous-. Beautifully written. I was almost ready to pass this off with a simple, "Nice writing, but very idealistic and cliched." And then, I read on: "Across a crowded post-dawn road, a stranger could be mistaken for something else, something beautiful and wonderful. Up close..."
Cold water on my bloated superior attitude. One sentence can turn a short story into a masterpiece.
| Lidyah chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
Okay now that just broke my heart a little.
| Blue Screen of Death chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
holy shit. apologies for the language, but thats really what needed to be said. You managed to make me CRY at a story, and a short one at that! which i havn't done since...forever. I particularly liked the discreptions of the eyes...the devil-may-care-i'm-love attitude of the narrating voice...and how a simple 'hi' could bring two souls together. Amazing. Simply amazing.
| Saggitaire chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
Wow that was really gud..._
| Spawn of Hell chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
nice. truly nice. youre good. _
| Miklan chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
You're right, it is depressing. Or maybe it's more... well, not depressing, because depression is a more heavy feeling. It's sort of sad, but it has a hopeful, softly happy feeling. It's definitely something to wake up crying to, but not in a desperately sad way.
I'd like to describe it in my favorite way - a blanket-like feeling.
| ola chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
lol. loved it!
sweet and simple
| elephant-chimes chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
Woah...I was actually scared when I read this. In a good way, mind. Man, this freaked me out! Also in that elusive good way. I was so scared that one would be hit by a truck, but neither was and I could just cry at how releived I am right now!
| Lami chapter 1 . 3/9/2003
If I believed in destiny,
And fate. That it is meant to be;
I'd face my days without a fear,
Knowing that you're always there.
You inspired me to write.:)
*sticks bow and ribbon on to poem and hands it to Rae* for your lovely story.
| Sheena chapter 1 . 2/20/2003
Amazing. truly amazing. Beautiful. Masterpiece. I adore it.
| suicidalrainbow chapter 1 . 5/4/2002
| lalalalelelel chapter 1 . 5/3/2002
wow, this is very interesting. I really like how you put so much emphasis on eyes!
| Marion chapter 1 . 1/18/2002
That greatly moved me and made me think. You were blessed to have such a beautiful thought.
| Angel of Peace chapter 1 . 1/14/2002
aw this wuz really good!
| Sapphire Weapon chapter 1 . 1/9/2002
OMG that was so beautiful!