Reviews for Desperately Lonely |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is very good! Loneliness is something I can relate to keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it sounds like a song. lol, i really like this one, ciao poi |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the song "It's Been A While", "Outside" is cool too... Anyway the way you build up the emotion and the exhaustion before the um collapse or whatever you would call it at the end is really well done... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! I came across your stuff by your name, I really love it, it's so intruiging, and on top of that your work rocks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's really good... and true for so many... |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. powerful. sacrificing the security of isolation for love. great piece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really sweet you can feel the pain in their voice! it almost amde me cry im not being sarcastic either! Its very well written keep it up! |