Reviews for You Behind My Eyes
dreamcatcher33 chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
amazing! great alliteration and rhyme...and it doesn't sound forced.

Taka and Keichirou chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
good work with this...T
ladygalad chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
In the first paragraph, the last line might sound better if it weren't repeated. i.e. "They never touched you at all" i just don't like how it repeats it sounds weird. All of this poem but the first and last paragraphs sounds like a hilary duff song.
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 8/1/2002'They'
Mayhem's BrainChylde chapter 1 . 1/14/2002
Whoa! That was startlingly emotional. I liked it a lot.
Goth Gal chapter 1 . 12/26/2001
wow that was amazing. nuff said
disengage the simulator chapter 1 . 12/23/2001
i loved this poem! i don't really know what to say 'cept, i love this poem!
Quados Amundae chapter 1 . 12/10/2001
Beautiful...I can really relate to this poem. Your poetry structure is unlike anything I've ever seen before. It's almost songlike, and I really enjoy it. Keep up the good work, You should write more poetry. :) -Q'Amundae
audig chapter 1 . 11/28/2001
I like! paranoia, loss, halucinations... it's all good!