Reviews for You Behind My Eyes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() amazing! great alliteration and rhyme...and it doesn't sound forced. cudios! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good work with this...T |
![]() ![]() ![]() In the first paragraph, the last line might sound better if it weren't repeated. i.e. "They never touched you at all" i just don't like how it repeats it sounds weird. All of this poem but the first and last paragraphs sounds like a hilary duff song. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooo..fun...hehe..'They' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa! That was startlingly emotional. I liked it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow that was amazing. nuff said |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this poem! i don't really know what to say 'cept, i love this poem! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful...I can really relate to this poem. Your poetry structure is unlike anything I've ever seen before. It's almost songlike, and I really enjoy it. Keep up the good work, You should write more poetry. :) -Q'Amundae |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like! paranoia, loss, halucinations... it's all good! |