I'm trying to grasp it. But I only picture something lost in the dark. If you could add to it and explain much more, you'll probably get more from it. Though, you are the writer and in the end it is your choice. Well, keep writing. xox.

This poem shows some potential, although I would add a few more stanzas.

Sad, but true. Excellently-written. Keep writing like this; it's obviously working!

~EG