I love the way you write. It's just so heartwarming - a pleasure to read. My brother has a problem with losing, in that he can't bear it, and will rather step down from anything rather than run the risk of losing. We've all tried in vain to revert him, but I think I'll show him this poem. Please keep writing. God bless!

The flow was very smooth. It was awesome. I loved your poem. You sure do a great job. Loved it! If you have time please review my stories and poems.

~phillie~

very cute, you actually make it rhyme without sounding stupid! a talent i've never had. . . great work.